Sunday, June 08, 2008

What grade do you guess?

One of the kids turned in his camp essay recently. Overall, it's one of the more coherent ones I've seen. Still, I figured I'd share it so that you can try to guess what grade he's in, based on his writing skills. The assignment was to write a short essay about what they think the perfect president would be like -- what he'd be like, what he'd do, how he'd treat the people, etc. I've copied everything as exactly as possible (going from handwriting to typing).


The Prefect President.

If I could clone a perfect President. He would be... Caring Respecful, Giving, loyal.

Caring to Others. He is going to Care adout the safely of his people and country. He will also try to avoid wars but if he must he will. I think this is important because there are people with cancer that have no money. He will start a fundraiser for them. The money will go straight to their families.

He would respect People and there rights. If he is in the Prime Minister Of China he will Be respectfull. He will bow to show respest.

Giving, He would give food to the poor. He would give money to suppot orphanges He would delevelope parks in low income neighborhoods. They will also have a Boys & Girls Center. This is important BeCause people need to eat and have somewhere safe to go.

Loyal to his people and Country. He will not be deceitful. When he say he is going to do something he will. This is important Because people, and I for one, do not want suprises such as wars.

In Conclusion This is my idea of a pefely cloned president, because he will put his people and country first.

So, what grade do you think he's in?

5 comments:

Allen F. said...

5th was my initial thought(honestly not sure why), but I think the kids at camp are all in middle school (right?), so 6th?

Emerly Sue said...

Haha, I had the same thought as Allen because I was like, camp = middle school. But I liked the essay.

Anonymous said...

This be Dan, How blessed ye are Dayna Carr. I just cant stop rhyming, WOOT WOOT....

Dayna said...

Okay, Allen & Emily, because I know you've been waiting in suspense...he's in 7th grade.

Dan -- you're nuts, but thanks for the blessing :) And keep on rhyming...I mean, come on, what's better than a white guy who rhymes and yells WOOT?

Allen F. said...

Now I feel bad, cause I thought it was good, I didn't mean to put this person down a few grades :(